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Friday, July 30, 2021

What I did in the holidays

                    after the holidays we made these for people in our class I made it for Miss A  
 

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  1. AnonymousJuly 30, 2021 at 10:54 AM

    Hi Amelia! l like what you said on what you did in the hoildays. Maybe next time you can put a full stop next to mini golfing.

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  2. AnonymousAugust 5, 2021 at 9:43 AM

    Hi amelia I am jana and I like what you did on the holidays it is a grate atvanchr it looks fun I wish if I can go there too.

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  3. Ms LapAugust 25, 2021 at 9:55 AM

    Kia ora Amelia,

    Great work on your postcard. It sounded like you had a wonderful time! Next time I would suggest you use a capital letter for your proper nouns, for example "Saturday". Keep up the good work Amelia.
    I am looking forward to reading your future posts.

    Ms Lap

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